The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I agree in toto with the speaker that the best of ideas mostly arise from an interest in commonplace things.Although there are few such ideas which developed a greater interest among people.The following examples brief us a clear idea about the claim raised about the ideas.
Firstly,A student gets an idea about various uses of kettle right from old age to present it is still used for hot water to make coffee but also few do make when there is no option to cook like in hostels they make noodles in kettle.Even consider the example of newton law the apple falling from the tree he got an idea and invented the discovery of motion.Before there was just borewells and people used the same for drinking water,Now with the increase in techonology people use water purifiers.
In addition to that,Take the mobile phones instead in the past it was just a phone where you can only talk but now you got introduced to touch pads,games,video call etc.Even the evolution of television which was just a box shape and only one channel in that time but now you get hundred number of channels and year by year the size of the screen has become flat.The chance of creating better ideas is increased by utilizing the resources we have.which also came from ideas that no one would have thought about it at the time. In the way, these great ideas we get to appreciate in our daily life were all started from thinking outside of box on subjects not necessarily simple as it appears. From the presented evidences, it is safe to conclude that commonly known matters first arise from uncommon ideas.
On the other hand,we can find any small thing which is just a commonplace arised from to a huge interest.The best example is j. k. rowling she was rejected many times as author but she never stopped writing if she did so we couldn't have the best series of books in the world the harry potter.Even jeff bezos at first he had nothing other than selling books but at first he too hasn't got many orders but later it increased and with the ideas he implemented continued till date being the number one e-commerce and the top billionare in the world.If he had no idea of improvising things probably we would'nt have been this advanced when compared to the past.
In the conclusion,while the statement presents fails to present sufficient condition of the best idea,Although it suggests the necessary condition of it at least, which I think is cogent and can be considered that plethora of ideas do come from a great interest in ordinary things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, well, while, at least, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69662921348 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62015148201 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555056179775 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.674083168 60.3974514979 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.25 118.986275619 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.625 23.4991977007 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.21951772744 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233713612993 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108855350559 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616949550884 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130752888592 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501696386222 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 14.1392134831 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.8971910112 219% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.