Music and other arts seem to be features of every society. In what ways are music and other arts important for societies and for individuals?
It is undoubtedly true that various form of arts such as music, dancing, painting, sculpture and others have a huge impact on every society. Throughout this essay, i will explain how various form of arts play an essential role for a community and people.
Firstly, art is a part of our history. It educates us about history of mankind. For example, cave painting, which explained the lifestyle of our ancestors. it is a medium to enlighten us about our past. On the other hand, Arts help a country and people economically. For example. plenty of people visit France or Greece to witness to those countries sculpture and historical monuments. As a result, travel industry is booming for them resulted in employment opportunity for lot of people. For example, local people can work a travel guide. So, both community and people are being beneficiary because of its’ strong arts history.
Secondly, arts can be considered as a medium of communication. Through the painting people can express their feeling, emotions. To uphold a countries heritage and culture to the entire world art plays a more role. That is why a line goes around us like “A picture can express more than 1000 words”. Sometime people who has linguistic disability, they can draw to express their views. Also, arts can connect lots of people from different parts of the world. It is difficult for people to connect each other due to different language barrier, but through music people can understand each other, can connect soul to soul. Furthermore, music also works as remedy to freshen up our minds, help us to put full concentration in our work.
Finally, Arts not only increase social skill but also helps to overcome isolation and loneliness. For example, several types of art exhibition bring lots of people under one roof where they and meet each other and become friend as well.
In summary, art is not only a part of our society but also an inseparable part of our life. From economical development of a community to improvement of a person mental health, in every phase it demonstrates an effective way.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n every society. Throughout this essay, i will explain how various form of arts p...
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Plenty
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...people are being beneficiary because of its’ strong arts history. Secondly, arts ca...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ss their feeling, emotions. To uphold a countries heritage and culture to the entire worl...
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Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...o an inseparable part of our life. From economical development of a community to improveme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9209039548 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71399398493 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562146892655 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5601749386 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7391304348 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3913043478 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290719077149 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792046016681 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059976621285 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163422039676 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353498370699 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n every society. Throughout this essay, i will explain how various form of arts p...
^
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s play an essential role for a community and people. Firstly, art is a part of...
^^
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...plained the lifestyle of our ancestors. it is a medium to enlighten us about our p...
^^
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Plenty
...y and people economically. For example. plenty of people visit France or Greece to wit...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...people are being beneficiary because of its’ strong arts history. Secondly, arts ca...
^^^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ss their feeling, emotions. To uphold a countries heritage and culture to the entire worl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...o an inseparable part of our life. From economical development of a community to improveme...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9209039548 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71399398493 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562146892655 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5601749386 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7391304348 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3913043478 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290719077149 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792046016681 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059976621285 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163422039676 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353498370699 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.