Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones has had a negative effect on young people s reading and writing skills To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uous use of mobile phones and computers.In my opinion,in creasing use of electroni...
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...obile phones and computers.In my opinion,in creasing use of electronic devices as ...
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...in creasing use of electronic devices as a way to interact with others will have ...
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...ommunication skills. On the one hand,these electronic devices bring us various ben...
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...ronic devices bring us various benefits.Cooperation between people in different countries w...
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...imited to written letters and telegrams.Nowadays,interactions by email,phone and video a...
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...o written letters and telegrams.Nowadays,interactions by email,phone and video are almost as ...
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...telegrams.Nowadays,interactions by email,phone and video are almost as good as face-to...
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... almost as good as face-to-face meetings,and many of us benefits from these interact...
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...y of us benefits from these interactions,either in work or social contexts.For example,...
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...tions,either in work or social contexts.For example,many people use social networks...
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...r in work or social contexts.For example,many people use social networks, like Facebo...
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...r than face to face On the other hand,our ability to communicate may be affected ...
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...ern technologies to interact with others,because interaction by using electronic devices...
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...a poor substitute to real communication.Words and letters are the only source of info...
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...e of information when looking at screens,so if a person interact with others for a ...
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...n interact with others for a long period,he or she may fail to recognize the inform...
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...hind others expressions and intonations.Furthermore,the availability of new communication t...
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... expressions and intonations.Furthermore,the availability of new communication techn...
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... people and discourage real interaction.For example,many young people choose to mak...
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... discourage real interaction.For example,many young people choose to make friends onl...
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...r peers in real world. In conclusion,communication technologies make the interaction with ...
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... others more convenient than ever before,but our social skills may also affected in ...
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...but our social skills may also affected in a negative way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86956521739 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.23250585692 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 487.493589701 49.4020404114 987% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 495.0 106.682146367 464% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.3333333333 20.7667163134 406% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.3333333333 7.06120827912 486% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154055937035 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112084909599 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345665518945 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100165207922 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321379963484 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 13.0946893788 370% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.16 50.2224549098 -78% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.44779559118 297% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.95 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.98 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.