Do you agree or disagree?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to public transportation.
Always it has been a controversial debate that how to allocate budget to different purposes in the governments. some people think that the improvement of the internet access is more essential than public transportation, however, in my opinion, it's better for a society to have improved public transportation than internet access. I feel this way because of some reasons that I will explore in the following assay:
First of all, as all we know the improved public transportation has many positive impacts on every people's life. one of that impact is that people could save more time because when governments spend more money to build more bus or train stations around the city, people would have more easy access to them in a short time and consequently, they have more time to do their tasks, hence their output would be increased a lot and also their satisfaction of their life would be increased too.
In addition, with improved public transportation, people would be encouraged to use them more instead of their cars and as a a result, the traffic would be decreased. my personal experience is a compelling evidence of this. since last year I went to my workplace by my car and because of the high traffic jam, I had to wake up very soon in the mornings. I could not use public transportation, because there was not any station near my house. But fortunately, 10 months ago a bus station was built near to my house with very fast and equipped buses and now I can use them. it has many positive impacts on my life and also other people, further than declined traffic in our area, it is not necessary for me to wake up very soon in the mornings and now I feel better and less tired.
Moreover, it is very clear for everyone that today we are faced with environmental issues around the world and we have to try more for its improvement. when people have an easy access to public transportation the amount of released CO2 to the atmosphere will be decreased a lot and consequently, it could help the situation of our planet.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, it's better to spend more money on the improvement of public transportation because it has more positive impact on our life. it could help us to save more time and on the other hand, the traffic jam would be decreased a lot and the other significant direct impact is the reduction of air pollution which should be considered a lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64485981308 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79488086878 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455607476636 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2875243441 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259282029864 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883660934932 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106754839156 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161310481058 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719371979712 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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