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with the development of the world and also the improvement of technology, life has changed a lot in contrast to the past and everything has become easier. one of these changes and improvements is the way of food preparation.
in my opinion, this change has improved our life because of some reasons which I will explorer in the following assay:
first of all, because of the busy lifestyles that everyone has nowadays, people do not have enough time to cook and prepare their meals like people who lived in the past. today, most of the food ingredients are very easy to provide. in every supermarket, people have easy access to them and they can easily buy them. furthermore, fast foods, which are very popular today, is another example of these changes.
nowadays, the food market is a progressive market that most of the businessmen invest in that. Because it has a main role in our life, and as I mentioned earlier, these improvements could help us to save more time and consequently we could focus better on our important goals.
In addition, with the advent of appliances to our homes, like refrigerators, microwaves or ovens, we can cook and prepare our meals in a short time which was not possible in the past. for instance, in the past people did not have access to fresh vegetables at most times of the year, but today with the improvement of transportation we can prepare vegetables freshly and keep them in our refrigerators.
Moreover, food packaging is another reason that eases food preparation. with the improvement of food packaging, we can keep food ingredients longer than before at homes. so, we do not have this concern to go to the market for shopping.
in conclusion, according to the above-mentioned reasons, food preparation nowadays is easier. as I explained, because of the technology improvement, people can provide and keep their food ingredients conveniently. and also, thanks to the kitchen appliances, we can cook our meal in a short time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92537313433 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93865398362 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498507462687 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1143692455 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990823116566 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03449482618 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544580009306 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436990399135 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644831312754 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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