The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The illustrations show the steps in chocolate production.
Overall, the process includes ten stages beginning with cocoa trees are grown and ending up with chocolate liquid is produced.
At first, cacao trees are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia and then produced pods. Ripe red pods are chosen and harvested. In this process, pods are collected for their white cocoa beans inside. After being gathered, white cocoa beans are fermented for some time. Next, they are spread in spacious area and dried under the sunlight. Later, cocoa beans are put in large sacks and transferred to the cocoa production factory by train or lorry. Beans are then roasted at high temperatures at about 350 degrees Celsius and are poured into the crushing machine. Roasted cocoa beans are crushed until the outer shells are removed. Lastly, the inner part of beans are poured into a press and are pressed continuously to produce liquid chocolate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12987012987 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41352376846 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8072396784 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766356718613 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03416724994 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544999312971 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870680657602 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718573151052 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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