Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is being argued that technological advancements in the past provided more merits to the general public and revolutionized their life in a way that recent progressions will not. I completely disagree with such argument in as much as recent developments shift not only people’s daily life, but also their working life in a much greater and positive way.
Technological developments in the 20th are closely connected with machinery innovation, which facilitate people’s life by taking up some household chores. For example, due to inventions of microwaves and dishwashers, people spent less time on family chores and lead an easier life. However, such improvement are not compatiable with today’s innovation, which goes further and brings such convenient lifestyle to the next level. For example, with the development of artificial intelligence, robots are introduced to do cleaning and even cooking all by themselves, which only requires a touch of the button and no hustles on people’s end at all. As a result, individuals are allowed to fully utilize their time to quench their thirst for knowledge and interests, leading to a more fulfilled life.
On top of daily issues, people’s working life are also changed because of the internet innovation. In the past, working adults’ family commitments are sacrificed to commute between home and workplace. However, nowadays thanks to the widespread access to the internet, meetings can be hold as video conferences and virtual offices are replacing physical ones, making it possible for working professionals to work from home and reach a work and life balance. A survey conducted by Queen’s university in 2019 revealed that having been given the freedom of choosing workplace, employees tend to enjoy a higher level of happiness.
To conclude, despite earlier technological progressions facilitated people’s life to some extent, I believe it is recent developments that bring more advantages and greatly changed people’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...in the past provided more merits to the general public and revolutionized their life in a way ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47896440129 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09407116251 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3221139322 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.083333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191651376459 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723444498872 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08178192758 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147412084586 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998919776035 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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