Your friend recently invited you for a meal at her or his house. After the meal, you decided to write to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Thank your friend for the meal
• Explain what you enjoyed about having the meal in your friend’s house
• Invite your friend to come to your house for a meal
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to include addresses.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear _____________
Dear Micheal,
I just wanted to thank you for the lovely evening I had last week. The meal that you prepared was the yummiest and don't take it the wrong way, I was surprised that you can cook so well. I think you should open your own restaurant.
Although the food was mind blowing, the highlight of the evening was your awesome family. Your Grandmother was such a delight, her stories had me in stiches. You can never say that she is ninety years old, she looks as if she is fifty. Everyone was so kind and hospitable towards me. Of course, I have to mention your cute nephew David, who had so much to talk about dinasaurs. He will grow up to become dinasaur expert.
I would love to have you over at my house. I cannot gaurantee the food would be as good as the one you cooked. However, I will try my best. It would be nice if you can bring you family along with you. Please let me know about any dietry requirements like lactose intolerence or food/nut allergy. I don't want you to go home poorly.
Please let me know when you are free, it would be lovely to see you soon
Lots of love
TTTT
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that you prepared was the yummiest and dont take it the wrong way, I was surprised ...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tose intolerence or food/nut allergy. I dont want you to go home poorly. Please l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25118483412 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19849028613 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3813877428 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.0625 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231324260441 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741996999726 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543679784156 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143359379012 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559949380849 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.