Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Numerous people these days believed that authority is the only factor that engaged with environmental preservation. From my perspective, while the government play an important role in protecting the environment, each ordinary individual can also make a significant contribution
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that the government is taking the lead in preserving the ecosystem. First and foremost, several serious problems need the financial resources of the government. It seems to be true that the government is the only organization that can afford to purchase state-of-the-art technological devices and pay for experienced scientists. Moreover, there are long-term projects that need stability investigation from taxes and other fees. In the second place, the government can enforce legislation on environmental protection. By the way of illustration, the emission discharging from manufactories and households might be limited by prescribing the discharge level on specialized law. In addition, imposing strict punishments such as heavy fined or even imprisonment to the act of damaging the environment can also be a good case in point
Nevertheless, the responsibility of each citizen should not be underestimated. First of all, environmental problems can only be solved thoroughly with the cooperation of the authority and the population. If each individual had an awareness of protecting the environment, the situation would be much more easily. The deforestation, for instance, can never be eliminated when farmers keep cutting down trees to meet their demands, regardless of the administration's regulations. Secondly, there are a great number of people voluntarily spend their time to preserving the environment. Accumulating small actions can make a world of difference. This is shown by several beaches throughout the global now clean again thanks to the volunteers who even diving into the water to pick up trash
To sum up, while the government plays an important part in preserving the ecosystem thanks to its financial resources and the legislation systems, the contribution of each individual deserves honorable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, by the way, first of all, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 3.97073170732 680% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 965.302439024 189% => OK
No of words: 321.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67289719626 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47682811914 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 106.607317073 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 283.868780488 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7975197653 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.071428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 5.23603664747 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138806409338 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479564021486 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04194751474 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089578366186 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409950084542 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 40.7170731707 221% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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