A large amount of advertisement are now targeted at children. many people say this has negative effect on children. should there for be band.To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Advertisement is a main part for the marketing of the products and after development there is a drastic change in business. some people think that advertisement have negative effect on children. However, I disagree with this statement to a large extent and I will discuss about it in a upcoming para.
There are immense benefit of the advertisement. firstly, if you talk about the nation benefit than their advertisement industry help to grow the nation economy moreover because of this industry employment rate is also grow. for instance, it gives a job to some celebrities as well as some label also stop apart from Breeze this is the second highest tax paying industry. which help to generate the revenue of the government to stop secondly, advertisement is also helpful to people full stop it gives a knowledge to every individual about the particular things such as people can find some good places to spend Diwali vacation by the tourism advertise. moreover people can find some useful products which can improve their living Lifestyle such as some technological equipment advertisement.
on the other hand, sometimes it also bad for children.for instance,children show the advertisement about some chocolate or some technological thing then they demand it from their parents and it will disturb them on economical way.However,parents can buy the children mind very easily.
In closing, I would like to say a that the benefit of the advertisement easily overcome on its disadvantages. moreover it becomes a part of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19277108434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18338900878 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6585885566 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199500091439 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784679931962 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766471916454 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135928882132 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833546140905 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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