Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some of the people argue that the price of the restoration is really expensive for this this reason they said that we should reconsruct them.As for me old buildings that have ancient traditions should be protected for people cultural features and touristic atractions.But others should be erase and buıld news ones instead for saving money and time.
To begin with,tradional features are precious for both tourist and also local residents.Because people are egaer to visit and touch historical buldings.For this reasons mınıster of culture should protect their historical buıldıngs with restoration.Although restroration can be much more expensive when we compare the price of new buıldıng construction.Goverments should respect their histories because ,fourtunately countries can subsıdıze their restrorations budget from their touristic incomes without having to spent much more money and time,since tourist are mostly willing to visit these types of buildıngs.In this wise they will leave some amount of money in these places.Besides ancient historical structures have important role for the people lifes,since they take can find a chance to imagine their former residents lifes with the help of the these types of buıldıngs.For instance,Mustafa Kemal Atatürk who founder of the Repoblic of Turkey lived in small house in Selanik.İf we had demolish this houses instead of restroations we would probably have not find a chance to imagine his lifes.
In addition,old buıldıngs that dont have any historical or tradional features should be replaced by new ones.Because restroration need much more special stuffs than reconstruction.These speacil stuffs are so valuable and thats why they are so expensive.For this reasons it is unneccesary to restroation .Goverments should buıld new ones instead of old ones to save their budgets.Also restroations need to mush more effort and special knowledges,since they need scientific knowledge.So experts organise meeting to dıscuss their road maps when they make restroation .For this reasons unfourtunately ıt will take much more time when we compare the construction new buıldıngs.Goverments should save their precious time,making new buıldıngs instead of old buldıngs that have no speacial features.
In conclusıon,most of the people argued that restrotaion are really expensive and new buıldıngs sould be construct instead of them.I agree them with the old buıldıngs which have no tradional meanings because ın this wise goverments might protect their budgets and times.But ı certainly disagree with them for the historical buıldıngs,since these types of buıldıngs have really curıal role for the publıc culture and also the are really effective for the tourist attraction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, as for, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78676470588 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52407599801 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.2975951904 503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 296.302526989 49.4020404114 600% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 590.25 106.682146367 553% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.0 20.7667163134 491% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 5.01903807615 1156% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177563599072 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133620597127 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466799792795 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133620597127 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466799792795 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 56.8 13.0946893788 434% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -40.51 50.2224549098 -81% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 44.3 11.3001002004 392% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.49 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.49 8.58950901804 145% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.1190380762 423% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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