You want to spend your holidays in the country outside India where your friend resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter, write:
Where and when you want to spend holidays
• Why you want to visit there
• When you are planning to visit
Dear Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well in health and spirits. It’s been quite long that I couldn’t write to you, Anyway, I’m so excited to tell you that I’m planning to visit Saskatchewan, Canada on 20th March to spend two weeks holidays. Recently, I’ve performed quite well in my company this year, so they offered me a fortnight holiday. I’d love to enjoy together with you during this time. Let me know if you’re available to catch up with me.
As you are quite familiar with the city, I would really like to visit the Art gallery, Ellen Shopping Mall, Rose garden and other famous tourist places. My main reason to explore this city is my research work that is related to the roses, and Rosegarden has several varieties of roses. So, I’m sure I would get adequate content for my research.
My company has booked a room in the Mount view hotel for my stay. My flight Air India will be landing around 9:30 A.M and I will check in on Friday, 20th March 2020 in the hotel.
Take care and see you soon.
Yours truly,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...Air India will be landing around 9:30 A.M and I will check in on Friday, 20th Mar...
^
Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Friday, 20th March 2020 in the hotel. Take care and see you soon. Yours tru...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd see you soon. Yours truly, Deepak
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57068062827 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17237743164 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69109947644 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4524394524 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201825322255 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074086170688 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066063518 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970645861167 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781166506396 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.