You successfully passed a job interview. You have to join by 15th November but you will not be able to do so.
Write a letter to your new boss. In your letter:
- explain your situation
- express your concerns -
- suggest solutions
Dear Sir/Madam,
First of all, I really appreciate for giving me the opportunity to serve your company as a Software engineer. Yesterday, I received my joining letter stating that I have to join the office by the 15th of November. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to join the office due to unavoidable situation.
Allow me to elaborate, on Friday, I was riding a bike and returning from the health club, during that time I met with an accident and I got injured. As our family doctor is giving me the best treatment and advised me to take at least a one-week bed rest to recover quickly. Therefore, I am not able to attend the office for the aforementioned date.
As I know that your company hired me for one of the important projects and the deadline is quite near to complete the assignment. I can understand your company situation.
Furthermore, to cover up the pending task, I can assure that I am planning to spend an extra two hours daily after my joining. I am quite certain that I will complete the pending work during that time. Moreover, if require I would like to work from home to communicate with the client and team.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61038961039 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71736674144 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6844903795 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0714285714 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240182825124 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903562578651 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854638862363 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133522610106 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107350113964 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.