More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
Undoubtedly, urban areas have enormous facilities in every prospectus which attracts individuals to settle into the cities by leaving their agricultural backgrounds. this kind of migration pattern not only have a negative impact on an environment, but it also haults the development of countryside. However, by adopting some measures this trend would be reduced.
There is no conflict in saying that human beings always have desires to uplift their living standards, more than past, which ultimately encourages them to indulge themselves in work, resulting push the workers towards cities. Although, the urban towns are bigger in size as compared to the rural ones, yet the city developers have a pressure to create more space to adjust enough migrates. In consequence, number of trees are cut down, pollution is spreading around us in the form of dust while constructing new buildings, and it largely contributes in the destruction of greener pastures as well. Despite it, this also becomes a cause of population ratio imbalance in city and rural dwellers. Due to this, villages are emptying and the cities are getting crowded which lessens the food production and eventually insisting government to import the food from an international market.
To tackle the above issue, some initiatives should be taken by regimes. Primarily, to keep engaged people in farming, minimum support price of crops must be increased, so that the peasants not only could combat their production expenditures and also being able to make some profit to nourish their families. Secondly, food processed industries could be established in the rural areas in order to generate more employment opportunities. Furthermore, advancement in technology, its usage in better menace would be beneficial to stop the migration.
In the exploration of several ideas, though the cities are providing numerous benefits to attract rural residents, but with the helping hand of government this trend could be stopped. By providing fascinating opportunities to them about farming, increasing their returns in the form of money by giving them advanced technologies.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-01-23 | Skinny | 78 | view |
| 2020-04-14 | Amarpreet Singh | 86 | view |
| 2020-03-19 | kaurS | 89 | view |
| 2018-03-19 | Parneetkor | 78 | view |
| 2018-03-19 | margareta440 | 94 | view |
- You have recently visited a local school in your community It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities Write a letter to the principal of the school and say How would you be able to help When and why would you do 73
- Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work You should Describe the presentation Why was it important How did it help you 89
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference 73
- Young people find it difficult to communicate with older people why is this what are the solutions 92
- 1 Some people believe that technology has made man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Undoubtedly, urban areas have enormous facilities in ...
^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...eaving their agricultural backgrounds. this kind of migration pattern not only have...
^^^^
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the development of countryside. However, by adopting some measures this trend wou...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sh the workers towards cities. Although, the urban towns are bigger in size as co...
^^
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
... cities. Although, the urban towns are bigger in size as compared to the rural ones, yet the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s should be taken by regimes. Primarily, to keep engaged people in farming, mini...
^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ily, to keep engaged people in farming, minimum support price of crops must be i...
^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...upport price of crops must be increased, so that the peasants not only could comb...
^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...combat their production expenditures and also being able to make some profit to n...
^^
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fit to nourish their families. Secondly, food processed industries could be estab...
^^
Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... employment opportunities. Furthermore, advancement in technology, its usage in...
^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Furthermore, advancement in technology, its usage in better menace would be bene...
^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous benefits to attract rural residents, but with the helping hand of government ...
^^
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing opportunities to them about farming, increasing their returns in the form of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44712990937 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9783310306 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631419939577 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.661607438 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.785714286 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168133241918 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536820441675 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301489097697 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931297484265 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298404325743 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.