Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is undeniable that these days Internet has become ubiquitous for most of individuals from all ages. There is a widespread belief that use of newspaper is falling by the wayside and it will be made obsolete by the development of the internet in the future. As far as I am concerned, although digital revolution may be crucial, the role of newspaper will be always irreplaceable.
On the one hand, it is true that, newspaper can bring host of benefits for readers. Firstly, newspaper provides people with reliable sources of information and it is always written by professional and dedicated authors. Meanwhile, the development of Internet may lead to the apperance of websites including unreal information. Sensational journalism tend to exaggerated due to the lack of Internet control. As a result, this tendency is likely to make numerous readers misunderstand some important issues and sometimes manipulate them to commit crime. Secondly, newspaper is suitable for all ages, especially the elderly, who usually find difficulty in getting used to surfing the internet. Furthermore, children can avoid risks of facing with unclear information from illegal sites, which exert negative influences during their formative years.
On the other hand, I also believe that the number of advantages can be resulted from choosing Internet as a source of information. From the perspective of convenience, thanks to the aids of advances in technology, people can get access to information by many ways such as computers or smartphones. Internet also provides wide ranges of issues happening in many parts of the world. Therefore, readers can broaden more knowledge and keep up with more trends. In terms of communication, Internet is the best environment to discuss anything, social media such as Facebook always give readers opportunities to express their feelings about particular issues aroung the globe. Therefore, people can easily understand each other and strike up more relationship with those who have the same interests and opinion.
In conclusion, it seems to me that while Internet brings host of benefits, newspaper will always remain an important source of information, even in Internet age.
- Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught To what extent do you agree disagree 89
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 100
- Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught To what extent do you agree disagree 92
- It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future Do you think it is a positive or negative development 11
- The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...days Internet has become ubiquitous for most of individuals from all ages. There is a widespread be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, by the way, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36416184971 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03532060445 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.972981018 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.176470588 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231543229929 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696751660266 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475379291755 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138131215773 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012345299691 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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