In some countries young people are encouraged to work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Dicuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
It is quite common these days for high school graduates in many countries who would like to take a gap year to have a part-time job or travel for preparing before attending university. Despite some disadvantages for this trend, I do believe that the advantages can outweigh these drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are a number of major drawbacks when the young teenagers have a break from studying after graduating from their high school. A serious drawback is lacking of academic knowledge which is important at universities. In some cases, the value of money attracts their earning money aspiration. This means that they insist on working and consider that they do not need to go to university because they are economically independent. But they are no longer like that because of their future needs more than what are they doing now. Besides, some may work for a job which is not related to their main major at university. It is really dangerous for their academic studies after taking a gap year.
On the other hand, I believe that taking time off after finishing their high school studies is the best way to improve and develop the personal resources. Needless to say that the students who spend a year working or travelling will have a broader view of life, prepare a beautiful profile for themselves and acquire some valuable experiences if they certainly decide what would they have to do. Students apparently have an advantage in terms of coping with challenges in academic studying process and easily get and understand the academic qualifications from their practical experiences.
It is necessary for high school graduated students to have a break before attending university. Students should have worked or travelled for their knowledge not for the value of money. As long as they think carefully, make a clear decision and have a particular plan, the good results will happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, if, may, really, so, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0094637224 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72068074438 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8977614879 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.866666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290494642676 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996182953349 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682591543672 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192521407958 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544510686343 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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