In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadasy reagard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
At one time, shopping was a usual household job but in recent years people seem it like an activity that help them relax. Shopping is more interested than people thought. Through this essay I will prove that with my point of view.
First, in the past, people just go to the market to buy something that they need to use for their family and they didn’t have a lot of choices, shopping just take them a few minutes to complete. But in the modern world, shopping is more interested, the supermarket is very enormous with many choices from one product. For instance: people want to buy some soap, they have to go try a lot of soap to try their smell, read the ingredients and the price before they decide to buy it. Therefore, the shopping is more interested , not just like in the past they just have one soap, go and buy.
Secondly, human is always happy and feel pleasure when they have something new and something they like. Example: after examination, student usually shopping to award themselves with the new clothes. Shopping is very effective by making people feel relaxed and happily and remove stress from work or study. Last but not least, today in the supermarket they not just have shop, they also have the areas for entertaining, café shop, the restaurant and it is very funny when we can go there with our family at the weekend to play besides shopping.
In conclusion, shopping is not just go and buy what we need. It also help us relax after hardworking, forgetting their problems and have a chance to spend time with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61231884058 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40656978949 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2267473245 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11568307514 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529070894814 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032270091192 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797642695227 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308099696699 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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