TOP 27 integrated
What caused the Little Ice Age.
1. disrupted ocean currents
2. volcanoes eruption
3. indirect effect of humans' activities
The article asserts that scholars have argued diverse reasons for the Little Ice Age and proposes three hypotheses. However, the educator overthrows all of them. He claims that the arguments mentioned in the reading are out-of-date, and none of them could account for that phenomenon. In the following, his justifications will be discussed thoroughly.
First of all, the passage upholds that melted glaciers, as a probable cause, entered the oceans and disrupted their currents. The lecturer, on the other hand, disapproves this idea, mainly because he insists that disruptive Golf stream is merely applicable in Europe and North America. This is not plausible for other locations like The New Zealand and South Africa; thus, that disruption cannot be considered as one of the main causes.
Secondly, the reading declared that the eruption of volcanoes made massive dark clouds which prevented the sunlight to reach the earth, and that caused the Little Ice Age. The professor thinks that the eruption was not large enough to cause a decrease in the planet's temperature. Moreover, providing that the eruption was so huge, some visual effects also must have been tangible, such as snow turns gray due to the dark clouds. Nonetheless, no visual effects have been recorder, so this scenario is also rejected.
Tertiary, the essay mentions that there was an indirect effect of humans' activities (omitting green house gasses by growing trees as forests) that caused that famous problem. The lecturer refutes this opinion since he acknowledges that individuals cut down the trees in order to make free fileds for other purposes such as growing crops for feeding the population. Therefore, the state of forests did not last long enough to cause the Little Ice Age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
...large enough to cause a decrease in the planets temperature. Moreover, providing that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as for, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21478873239 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60453678848 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.607311465 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236359195657 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689556508615 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067970096383 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116843954 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533317286817 0.0443174109184 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.