You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •
describe the item.
• Explain where and when you left it
• say what action you would like the company to take.
April 4, 2020
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. This is Karim Farhan, one of your regular customers and I am writing to you to help me in an urgent case. I lost a valuable item in yesterday noon journey from Cairo to Alexandria.
Firstly, I took the train from Cairo railway station yesterday at 1 PM, and as per the ticket the train number was A123900. Although I was working on my Apple laptop the whole journey, I forget to put it as well as the charger in my case after sending some important emails to my clients. I lost it on the empty seat beside me, and the seat number was 0098, VIP section.
Secondly, I want your company laborers on this train to do whatever they can to find it because I will lose a lot of contracts if I did not get this laptop. Additionally, I would like to compensate anyone who can help me to get it back. Appreciate your help in finding it, and I promise you that I will take care about my personal gadgets next time.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon, and your rapid action is highly appreciated.
Faithfully,
Karim Farhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ant your company laborers on this train to do whatever they can to find it because I ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40312794524 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9026591448 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228470885322 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754326032217 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515705933208 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138578732799 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709604502073 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.