Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?
it is undeniable that nowadays, tourism has experienced radical changes and exerted numerous influences on the society. host of developing countries are trying to provide more regular expansion for this industry. As far as I am concerned, this tendency may resulted from several factors, which leads to a number of drawbacks, as well as notable benefits for the countries.
There are two primary reasons behind the significant modification of tourism industry. In terms of individuals, due to the aids of modern transportation, it is more affordable for host of people to commute. moreover, the development of social media and advertisements tend to spark individual’s curiosity on learning culture and tradition around the worlds. therefore, local and national authorities are likely to prioritize expenditure on famous tourist destinations in order to meet the need of foreign visitors. From the financial perspectives, these days, tourism is becoming one of the most influential industries, which provide abundance of opportunities for employments and promotion prospects in developing nations. therefore, in order to prosper and gain competitive edge with rival neighbourhoods, those nations have to provide funding for famous destinations to attract more visitors.
On the one hand, this phenomenon may leads to some notable benefits. By attracting more foreign visitors, the host countries can help more people broaden their knowledge about the culture, tradition, which give strong sense of identity and provide a link to our roots. moreover, the government also earn more money for the maintenance of their tangible heritages and spending on other problems such as environment. On the other hand, provide excessive funding for tourism may lead to the lack of concentration on other industries such as education or healthcare, which bring detrimental consequences for daily life of local dwellers.
In conclusion, development of tourism my resulted by host of reasons. it seems to me that although this industry may be advantageous for the countries, excessive development also results in negative consequences for other vital industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63692307692 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22776417021 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9354166204 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.133333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14441891673 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526232360961 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525572939148 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10241486864 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380322231409 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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