You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter
– Describe your future wife/husband.
– What will happen at the wedding?
– Why do you want to invite him/her?
Dear Ali,
How're you, my friend? How's your family? We haven't met since we got together last year at my brother's birthday. Hope things are ok at your ends. I'm writing to invite you to my wedding.
Firstly, I want to tell you that I'm over the moon; I found my girl. She’s a beautiful girl, and she's the same qualification. Also, she’s from my district, and I know her very well.
Secondly, I'll tell you my plan for the occasion; I am going to make a small party at noon in our garden. After we'll finish the wedding party, I’ll invite my close friends to go outside and spend some time at a boat in the River Nile which is located near to me. In the end, I will go for Honeymoon in Hurghada for one month.
Well, as you know, you're my best friend; I do need your help and support during my special day. So, if you can come 2 days early, it’ll be better. For your information, this day will be on 25Th Of August.
Till I see you, send my love to your beloved family. In case you don't have my new number, here it's 5566788.
Lots of love,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ali, Howre you, my friend? Hows your family? ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: How's
Dear Ali, Howre you, my friend? Hows your family? We havent met since we got...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...re you, my friend? Hows your family? We havent met since we got together last year at ...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...thday. Hope things are ok at your ends. Im writing to invite you to my wedding. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...g. Firstly, I want to tell you that Im over the moon; I found my girl. She’s a...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...nd my girl. She’s a beautiful girl, and shes the same qualification. Also, she’s fro...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
..., and I know her very well. Secondly, Ill tell you my plan for the occasion; I am...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...da for one month. Well, as you know, youre my best friend; I do need your help and...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ove to your beloved family. In case you dont have my new number, here its 5566788. ...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ber, here its 5566788. Lots of love, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20487804878 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15355771385 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70243902439 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7828126122 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.7058823529 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0588235294 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243441509311 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822074621529 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556785568866 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136000401935 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474847833596 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.