Today, the internet has created that chance for ordinary people to become famous. Is it a positive or negative development?
In all times the popularity has been providing to a successful lifestyle. Today the internet has made the possibility for usual people to become famous and popular. I strongly believe that this is a beneficial trend in today’s society.
Firstly, the popularity leads to a successful life. It means that the human who has a big amount of money due to the fact that they are famous and popular is going to have an independent life. Therefore, people who have such life will be much happier than usual people. For example, my friend possesses a lot of money on his credit card, thus, he is traveling all over the world without any issues and enjoys his life. In other words, the popularity provides you with enormous amount of money that you can spend as you personally crave, for traveling or to buying some exclusive cars or houses; all in all it entails freedom life.
Secondly, a successful life may be viable due to the fact that you are a talented person doing interesting and popular things. In other words, with the aid of the internet nowadays it is much easier to become a celebrity if you are a positive individual and implement trendy ideas. For instance, my friend, who shoots some funny and fascinating videos on Youtube platform, receives a big number of views and earns a huge amount of money owing to the fact that this website provides users with advertisement. Thus, if the person is well-known and talented somewhere in the internet, they could make money and lead a better life than other people.
In conclusion, I am convinced that it is a positive tendency for talented people, since they can be noted by other humans and become contented
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73883161512 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60279278777 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1477729188 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15566839635 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678944693949 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979656934231 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124822793664 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719711028665 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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