Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increase than ordinary workers. Employers’ organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your view ?
Some people believe that big companies should pay a large amount of money to attract directors who have great management skills. I personally agree with this opinion because genius directors always have high profiles and vital responsibilities, and owing to high competition.
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to attract a talented manager who receive many offers
to attract a talented manager who receives many offers
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