Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter,
Tell him/ her about your flat.
Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay.
Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Arnold,
Thank you so much for your last letter. I was so thrilled to read that you agreed to stay at my house while I’ll be vacationing.
As for my flat, you have already been here but I will also spell out the details for you. The flat number is A3 and the name of the building is Sea View Apartments. Since we won’t be meting before I leave the keys will be with the next door neighbour, Mr. Sharma.
The main door has been jammed since monsoon, so don’t be alarmed if it doesn’t open in the first go. Just give it a push and it shall give way. When you cook, you will have to turn the cooking gas valve to the right, and it’s situated to the left of the stove. The house gets a bit noisy from the evening traffic nearby, so you might want to keep the windows close at those times. In case of any electrical or plumbing issue, you can tell the watchman Rajesh. He will call the right handyman and get it fixed.
Looking forward to meeting you once I return.
Best regards
Arjun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Arnold, Thank you so much for your last letter. ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at my house while I’ll be vacationing. As for my flat, you have already been he...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24870466321 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03403349931 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1777770032 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0769230769 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118492684158 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396527457132 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391548691553 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073403605764 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539472092394 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.