Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, With the advanced digital technology, Cinematography is not only an exclusive to large companies but also by individuals using their own devices have become increasing popularity than ever.From my point of view, This trend is positive due to the benefits which it has been brought to human life.
It is fact that getting accessible to filming technology help people to discover their hidden talents .Therefore they have chances to creat excellents videos or movie content in order to release to the audience.In addition to that, they may gain their reputation via just by one or two short films.Like for instance, In Vietnam, you can see tons of amateur movie making film teams with low-budget which produce some kinds of various short films or web dramas and posted it on Youtube or Facebook but they are well-received by general public and there are many prospective actor , actress or director are well known and even afterward some actresses or actors fall into the sights of the famous directors.
Addtionally. Giving potential filmmakers have opportunities to bring their works to the world and make a name for them and their nation.This help them to have a lot income in upcoming future if their product really have a deeply influence on people .Thanks to this, they also have mor chances to make new friends with foreigner directors to broaden their knowledge about cinematography and bring the valuable things to country.For instance, when they make with foreigner creators, they are likely to learn the way making film with high technique and apply it to their films or movies in coming film project.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the widespread popularity of amateur film thanks to the advent of digital devices will be surely welcome as a trend.It is really critical to encourage people creat movies by this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01941747573 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70652850827 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.520884972 49.4020404114 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 387.75 106.682146367 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.25 20.7667163134 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.25 7.06120827912 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180898186739 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10032965622 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217672325745 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100235052981 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217617987731 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.68 50.2224549098 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.02 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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