The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.
what are your opinions on this?
The Internet has brought many changes to our life in recent years. Some people argue that these changes have many detrimental side effects, whereas others take the position that despite the negative technology effects, its advantages outweigh its drawbacks, which I firmly agree with for the reasons as follows.
On the one hand, the amount of time, which individuals specify to use the Internet, indisputably has brought many grave effects. This is fundamentally for this reason that the human, making an immense amount of time to plunge themselves to this cutting-edge technology, cannot afford the time to done the works, which are prior to them. Therefore, their life can be ruined. Although many individuals, who have been addicted to this leading-edge technology, do not accept these consequences, admittedly it is obvious how this addiction impact on their life. Thereby, too much use of the Internet, in turn, result in unbelievable effects.
On the other hand, the flow of information inevitably has revolutionized the way we live. In comparison to the earlier time, which required obtaining information entailed long hours searching library shelves, now people can gain the information with some click through the web easily and conveniently. Hence, not only data can be accessed and users can approach their goals, but also they can inform other people about their vast interesting amount of materials, extended by themselves. For instance, who has done researches, used these data and then expose their outcome with other brilliant students. Consequently, this word-class technology provides information, ranging from the recipe of scrumptious food to complicated knowledge.
By way of conclusion, the Internet by itself brings many materials online that are hazardous for people. Despite this, I once again take the position that its advantages are twofold and has greatly affected modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88503663478 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2361669032 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194216657593 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613011751627 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543037290547 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115244166381 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492189343301 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.