Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only
for entertainment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.\
Even though a minority think that the only purpose of television is to serve entertainment, a majority vocalizes that TV is conductive in imparting education. While some portion of populace considers it acts as stress buster only which endow immense entertainment, I cogitate that it is a treasure of information which is helpful in uplifting the horizon of
knowledge.
Television has countless channels in different languages which proffer the rich source of passive entertainment. Amusement in form of Movies, drams, music and reality shows on Tv always help individuals to get rid of stress and revitalize themselves. Also it is biased to overlook the fact documented by American Mental Health Council that those American who spend colossal amount of time watching popular sitcoms always less inclined towards anxiety. However, I believe that apart from entertainment it also satisfies the thirst of knowledge.
On the other hand, TV is a famous source of acquiring the true education in interactive and interesting way. Seemingly, TV news, debate shows, history channels and so on reflect information in video form which directly stores in the subconscious and inculcate the cognitive skills. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by Discovery Channel, in the previous year, popular shows such as 'Man v/s Wild' has really enriched the knowledge about exotic wildlife of youngster. Therefore, I think that Tv is a effective way of
learning which instills the abstract thinking and preserves the information for long time.
In conclusion, although tv is renowned form of entertainment which erode the undue pressure, it also renders the role of educator which provides huge information in lucid form. Therefore, I always believe that Tv intensify the knowledge which eventually leads to critical thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42253521127 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02566224444 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.902567039 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738573651434 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279858868846 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254975542323 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458081825676 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238472245908 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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