Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
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It is increasingly common for people to live an inactive lifestyle, rather than maintain a physically active one. This essay will discuss about the relevant problems and how to tackle them by taking corrective measures.
To begin with, there are some problems related to a sedentary lifestyle. People now usually tend to sit for a very long periods of time and they are not moving like they used to. So, when they eat more calories than they burn, they gain weight. As a result, that limited activity will cause obesity. An additional problem is that an inactive lifestyle can affect the mind as well because more depression will be produced if individuals lose the ability to be as active or mobile. For example, it has been proven that due to constant watching TV or playing electronic games, people can increase their risk for anxiety.
Several actions can be taken to deal with these problems. One effective way would be to implement more exercise into daily routine. This can be done by going for a walk, taking the stairs or standing by working. These exercises not only are easy to do but also help people promote weight loss and attain a healthy weight. Additionally, people stay less active because they are driving a vehicle or travelling by bus instead of cycling. Therefore, the best solution is that people should be encouraged to walk or cycle to keep them active and protect the environment as well.
In conclusion, it is indeed true that living an inactive life causes a lot of health problems, including obesity and depression. Some effective solutions are proposed is that individuals should do more exercise and change their commute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'period'?
Suggestion: period
...now usually tend to sit for a very long periods of time and they are not moving like th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92170818505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57926849706 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0035509453 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102864243621 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035969397967 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383557620289 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618583690377 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149514974342 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.