Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? Which of all factors do you think are the most important?
Economic development is believed to be the most important element for evaluating the society prosperity, while others hold the view that there are various factors which are involved in developing countries. In my opinion the main factor of this subject is the countries wealth and economic development. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
First and foremost, advancement in county is sophisticated subject for estimating and investigating, thereby many factors are influential here. Not only has society’s circumstance depended on economy, but also health care, the average of people’s literary, rate of crime, life expectancy and the tendency to preserving environment are the most significant indicators of successful society. For example if the country has the most low rate of criminals in their prison and jail, it would be the reason of effective management of country which lead them to different others achievements.
Although there are several compelling factors this evaluation, in my idea the economy progression is the most remarkable one. When between the income and outcome is balanced in a society, this mean they can improve their economy. If economy has improved in a country , the efficient health care, education facilities, low rate of violence will be brought by this main factor. For instance, seldom will burglary and come be done by people if they have enough warning and wealth in hand to enjoy and improve their life.
In conclusion, given the above consideration, despite the fact that for measuring the situation of countries, there are many remarkable factors, economy is the most one and can dominate other factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31365313653 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94550233348 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1203615353 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259719165189 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092412231682 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555804603184 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14639098631 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483927054011 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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