Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, researchers consider that letting grade-schoolers learn foreign languages is easier than secondary school students. In my opinion, this trend would create certain benefits but there will also have some drawbacks.

It is obvious that letting primary school students study a second language creates several advantages. One of the evidence is that kids will have more opportunities and time to study. In my country, approximately 75% of families who have kids were started to learn English when they are primary school students. Obviously, they have had a stronger language background than children learning English from secondary school. Another reason is that children will more confidence in communication. Normally, when children learn a new language, they are excited and want to share with friends or parents about everything. The more knowledge they illustrate, the more confident they have to communicate.

In addition, this development leads to drawbacks in various areas, especially children's psychology. Firstly, many families usually make their kids study languages too soon, which is no good for them. For example, a child was begun to learn English when he was 4. Because his brain was not developed to manage too much knowledge, so he was disordered. Furthermore, if the children were studied when they have not been ready, they would have been stress and have not wanted to study. That makes the amount of knowledge they have is not so much.

In brief, the development shows effects on both sides whether it is positive and negative. They are plus point to the children's opportunities and communications regarding. However, the downside would emergy consequently in terms of their psychology and brain.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40959409594 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89437706737 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9783103746 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19399154321 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636325178109 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742052940162 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121931560843 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798888721305 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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