You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback o this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggests another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with cookery course which provides the institute of The Expert Food. I was recently finishing a short-term cooking course for three months which from January 18th to March 18th. This training was game-changing in my life since I completed this valuable course.
Let me describe in details. Between cookery training, I have learnt plethora type items such as first food (e.g. burger, chicken fry and others), Chains cuisine. Furthermore, I learned how to clean after cook and properly serve foods to the customer as well. After that, I started my own restaurant business which is quickly popular in my location because of testy and tidy. I am really happy and thanks to you.
Would you kindly to another cooking course like a traditional meal. I am a happy reason for traditional course very demandable. My many customers ask me when I will local food. I also talk to my coursemate; they are very excited about the traditional course. So, would you please arrange another short traditional course.
Thank you for your cooperation.
I look forward to hearing from you for your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
H. M. Zahid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enience. Yours faithfully, H. M. Zahid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00507614213 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72221344324 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675126903553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3072814862 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.625 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296503637467 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888615158856 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656732690321 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154890132156 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535437164873 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.