You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback o this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.
describe what you enjoyed about the course
say how much cooking you've done since the course
suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my happiness about learning to cook various cakes from your class that was held last week.
I enrolled for cake making the course a week before and did some pre-learning before attending the class. Since I do not have basic knowledge of cooking in bakery items, I enjoyed the way you thought us from the basics and in a serene way. I not only liked the way you equipped us with the deep know-how but also the way you thought us about the specific ingredients that should be used while cooking different types of cakes.
After doing a course at your class last week, I tried making a chocolate cake on my brother's birthday that was a day before yesterday. Having tried it only once, it was reasonably good. Though it was not as attractive as I saw in your class, but was complemented by all my family members.
I would like you to conduct a Chinese cooking class in the future. Since this cuisine is becoming more popular in our town, many people are interested in learning it. Moreover, as there are not many restaurants in our town who make authentic Chinese food, learning this will give many people an opportunity to serve as a Chinese cook in renowned restaurants.
Hoping to learn many more authentic dishes at your class.
Your's faithfully
John Patel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a serene way" with adverb for "serene"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... way you thought us from the basics and in a serene way. I not only liked the way you equipped ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69396551724 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50925383052 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1468180274 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154863958291 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574089314954 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358846772122 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076487692702 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432270656058 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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