Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion
To live and work abroad is becoming easier nowadays, especially for young people who are more flexible than old generation. However, there are some benefits and backdraws in both situations and i will discuss both views of this opinion below. In mu opinion, i think neutral.
On one hand, studying or working in foreign country is a chance for people who come from developing country to experience the high quality education, such as economics or science field. Besides, people who live in unfamiliar condition will learn how to take care of theirselves, become more independent, strong-willed and accumulate some soft skills such as: problem solving, team building and communicating. As a result, many high students and employees in Vietnam desire a scholarship to study abroad.
On the other hand, living alone in different country is made you always under pressure, especially who don't make up their mind first. Homesick, lack of financial or getting in trouble of communication are the main problems that most people struggle to get over with when living abroad. In Japan, many students from Vietnam live in poverty, which leads to a result that they try to find an illegal work. If those who living and working in foreign country fail to deal with such difficult problems, they will waste their money and faculty and the most important that their parents will be disapointed. In some Eastern country like Vietnam, China or Korea, their family is always on top of what they concerned so many people feel paranoid of other compliments from their family.
To sum up all above, people need to improve their skills not only when they work abroad permanently but also when they live in mother country. It's necessary to be hard-working if you want to go far in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, i think, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9595959596 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64043486793 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.269447169 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303238703638 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104968237924 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440548935792 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186160600681 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031785286032 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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