These days , it is believed that young people should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in their own country forever .
On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their relations and friends who give them many encouragement when they face difficulty . Young people still reiceve assistance from their parents when they have nervousness , therefore teenagers would not be nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could not have a great development without young people who have a requirement for contributing effort for their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability who would contribute a lot for their countryside .
On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of young people want to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunities in modern and advanced country than their countryside where they could not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big companies and large projects which require more and more labour , therefore young people easily find a work and earn a lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often hard-working and have a special talent so they have many positive effects on young people who would imitate and improve themselves daily.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time 67
- The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You sho 56
- Some people believe that a college or a university education should be available to all students Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students Discuss these views which view do you agree with Explain why 67
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
These days , it is believed that young people should...
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...le should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to so...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in t...
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...people work in their own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced tha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should st...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay...
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Suggestion: .
...s should stay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their re...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...tay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their relations an...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun encouragement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many encouragements'.
Suggestion: many encouragements
...eir relations and friends who give them many encouragement when they face difficulty . Young peopl...
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... encouragement when they face difficulty . Young people still reiceve assistance f...
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Suggestion: ,
...their parents when they have nervousness , therefore teenagers would not be nervou...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... be nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could no...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could not have a gr...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ontributing effort for their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability who would...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d contribute a lot for their countryside . On the other hand , it is understa...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...heir countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority ...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of yo...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would hav...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...llenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunit...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people would have more opportunities in modern and advanced country than their c...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big comp...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big compa...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...jects which require more and more labour , therefore young people easily find a wo...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn dive...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowled...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in dev...
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Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often h...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... imitate and improve themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reaso...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ove themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support yo...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2676056338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81953759396 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8712317249 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237412599047 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100814074986 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747289139348 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169833565508 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824710067466 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
These days , it is believed that young people should...
^^
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to so...
^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in t...
^
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...people work in their own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced tha...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should st...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s should stay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their re...
^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their relations an...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun encouragement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many encouragements'.
Suggestion: many encouragements
...eir relations and friends who give them many encouragement when they face difficulty . Young peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... encouragement when they face difficulty . Young people still reiceve assistance f...
^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...their parents when they have nervousness , therefore teenagers would not be nervou...
^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... be nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could no...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could not have a gr...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ontributing effort for their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability who would...
^^
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d contribute a lot for their countryside . On the other hand , it is understa...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...heir countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority ...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of yo...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would hav...
^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...llenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunit...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people would have more opportunities in modern and advanced country than their c...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big comp...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big compa...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...jects which require more and more labour , therefore young people easily find a wo...
^^
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn dive...
^^
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowled...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge...
^^
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in dev...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often h...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... imitate and improve themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reaso...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ove themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support yo...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2676056338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81953759396 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8712317249 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237412599047 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100814074986 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747289139348 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169833565508 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824710067466 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.