People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before. Is positive or negative development?
In the developing society, people always want to their life which is more and more comfortable. Therefore they buy many products to serve for their life. Personally, buying a lot of products has both positive and negative side.
When spending a lot of money to buy new things, people truly create many wonderful things. Firstly, buying many products makes many new works for employees. When people want to purchase more products, manufacture must try to produce a lot of products to suffice for buyers. Therefore manufacture will hire a lot of employees to make more products and many new works will be bring for people. Moreover, people buy new things, which is a motivation to create many advanced goods. Because manufactures want to have a competitive edge, they will try to make products, which have many advanced functions to sell for people. Because manufactures realize that when people have much money, they will always want to buy the best and latest products. For example, the manufactures of cell phone produce and upgrade a lot of new cell phones continuously to purchase.
On the other hand, some of drawbacks can be appeared when people buy various products. Firstly, the environment must bear the burden of trash. When buying new things, people will throw former things away although they don’t be damaged. Therefore more and more products will be located in dump although they still operate well. In addition, people can waste money in unnecessary products. When having too much money, people often spend money to purchase new products although they cannot exploit all of the functions of product. For example, people like to buy a lot of technology products such as cell phone, laptop, smart watch and etc although they seldom use all function of one product.
In conclusion, people have many money and use their property to purchase various things, which is a good signal for the development of countries. Although having some of tiny disadvantages, spending money for new products will innovate the life of people and the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59907323115 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423529411765 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7123346556 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.85 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25731070381 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978319488186 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619082405424 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18949761089 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035257664753 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.