After high school, many student make a choice to go to college or university or not. In most people opinion, obtaining a university degree is the best way to get sucess in life.
After graduating from the high school, many students usually choose to study upper at college or university. In my opinion, going to university or college is not the only way but it is the best way to get success because it will give student necessary skills, major knowledge and more opportunities to improve to get success.
First of all, studying at college or university supply student a great amount of specific knowledge at various aspect in their major. They are taught by many experiment lecturers in a good condition. Beside that, they are trained many necessary soft skills such as teamwork, time management, public speaking, communicating skill and so on.
Secondly, it also gives them many chances to practice their knowledge into certain situation. University usually organize many competitions such as English speaking competition, Olympic English and so on. Many extracurricular activities are occurred to help student improve their soft skills like green summer, blood donation and many other is useful for them. In addition, when attending these competition or activity will give them more relationship involved with classmate.
The last but not least, in this century, the applicant will apply someone who have a bachelor degree more often than people who do not have because they want the employee who have sufficient knowledge and essential skills. Especially, a good bachelor degree will make the applicant to believe in your capability or your knowledge and give a chance to start to get success.
In brief, going to college or university is not the quickest way but it is the safest way to achieve desirable goal in future and a higher academic student will succeed as the way they want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...s like green summer, blood donation and many other is useful for them. In addition, when a...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this competition' or 'these competitions'?
Suggestion: this competition; these competitions
...l for them. In addition, when attending these competition or activity will give them more relatio...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in brief, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1541218638 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77152493136 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 283.868780488 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2963731481 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291020808318 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975914669381 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834269366434 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166025311819 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109804157804 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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