A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
• Describe he benefits of sponsoring the sport team
• Summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
• Say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to regard with decided to fund that is a great opportunity for us and you give two good option for the sponsor.
Children’s sports sponsor is remarkable for our local community the reason young generation always lead to future. Two years of looking after the teenage game by money that is helpful.
In addition, here people are enjoying a live concert where not young but also elder people love. That why we have arranged a musical program arrange once every year.
As if, a cultural program is an incredible moment for us but we want to game funding for children because live concert occurred every year.
We, therefore, request you to kindly grant to sponsor for children’s sports team and we are ensuring that properly maintain this fund. Please feel free to contact us, if you need any question or information by mail or direct call.
Thank you for your cooperation.
We look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
The Town Hall Society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Yours faithfully, The Town Hall Society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54773849297 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702857142857 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7716059346 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287678572671 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103043790408 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741346117812 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124197429196 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851620321036 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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