Improvement in health,education and trade are essential for the development of poor nations,However the govt of richer nations should take more responsbility for heloing poor nations in such areas.To what extent you agree or disagree.
It is quiet common dilemma of under develop countries that they donot have sufficient medical,learning and marketing facilities.Infact it is very necessary for poor localities that welloff nations should support them in these sectors.Although in my opinion, to help substandard states is productive but the needy realm should be laible to honestly utilize the financial and moral support of that countryside.
It is undeniable reality that impowerished countries are facing many socail and economical problems,However it is due to dramatical increasing rate of the population.Even though masses hardely meet their essential needs.For instance Pakistan has approximately the population of 22 cror and their poverty rate is 54.6 percent in rural areas and 9.4 percent in rural areas as well.Moreover the malnutrition rate is 40 percent in children and 49 percent in women.Most of the children dies every year due to lack of food.
Furthermore there is a deficiency of quality education lack of educational institutes as well as failure business schemes.poor medical and hygenic conditions shows the real real picture of poverty and have worse ramifications they edure.
To fullfill this economical gap the well establish states must come forward to support them in these sectors.They could give them funds and loans on low tax amount as well as medical staff good trainer and create opportunities for business.Hence they should not ignore them from any of the side.
To sum up all facts and figures it is concluded that it is the right of vulnerable nations to get support but they should not spoil them in the hands of corrupt politicians and bureaucrats it could only be for their poor population.if they donot focus over poor nations they would have corroding effects.because it is ,said that poverty is a death.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30344827586 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.242552979 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9762470614 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 307.6 106.682146367 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.7667163134 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.6 7.06120827912 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182710860514 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956790065791 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541397678705 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956790065791 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541397678705 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 13.0946893788 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.87 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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