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Which one person from history would you like to meet? Give specific reasons for your choice.
In the history of the humankind, There are many characters that changed the direction of the history by acting and thinking different. At first glance it seems difficult for me to choose someone since there are many significant persons who shapes our lives in the world but if I had the chance I would like to meet Mustafa Kemal Atatürk. My arguments for this point listed as follows.
One of the primary reason for my propensity is that Mustafa Kemal Atatürk is the greatest person in our history. To me one of the most important features of a significant person is to stand tall to the difficul...
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