Because of your job, you have to move to a new city. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter
ask them to help you find somewhere to live
tell them the kind of accommodation you want to find
tell them which area of the city you want to live in
Dear Megan,
It has been a while since we met on that holiday in Puerto Rico; I hope you are doing well. My things are going well and soon, and they will be even better as being promoted, I am moving to Miami. So mainly this is the reason why I am writing to you; since you live there, I was hoping you could help me with accommodation.
Even though I have spent a weekend in Miami once, it was a long time ago, so I have no idea where to stay. Could you help me find somewhere for a living? Maybe you could give me links to websites or perhaps you know someone who has a flat for rent?
Yes, I would like to stay in a flat with one bedroom, a big bathroom and a kitchen. I think a studio would be perfect for me. Also, it should be on the ground floor because recently, I have injured my ankle, so taking stairs every day would not be a good idea.
Besides that, it would be great if the flat was not far from the ocean. With my asthma, fresh air is essential for my lungs, so I would need to have a chance to breeze it every day.
I am sorry, but I cannot write any longer because I am meeting my boss in 5 minutes, so I have to prepare some papers. Please let me know if you find something on my request.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Olga.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-04 | LaraNg | 73 | view |
| 2020-05-23 | Olha Yevtushenko | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, well, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01556420233 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08512393589 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9326971952 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234643905244 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916370971764 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102615951346 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129602193455 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915017792022 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.74 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.