You recently bought a toy from a company online. When the toy was delivered, you found some problems with it. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter:
• Describe the toy
• Explain the problems with it
• Tell the manager what you would like her/him to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to report the faulty model Helicopter that I purchased from your online company on Saturday last week.
On 26th Saturday, I visited your online website to purchase a surprise gift for my grandson, who is a big fan of aircraft vehicles. So, I searched for the most highlighted, recommended, and best-seller aircraft miniature. Based on different recommendations, I ordered a top-quality kid-safe toy Helicopter which has model number KS243567 and the total cost was Rs.5000.
When I unpacked the product, I was alarmed to discover that not only did the remote controls not work, but the quality of the product was not as good as promised. Also, the machine had extremely sharp edges on which a child could easily cut himself. I find this exceedingly unacceptable.
In view of what has happened, I would like you to get in touch with me immediately on receipt of this letter. The toy is not fit for purpose and, therefore, I expect it to be collected and a replacement provided at the earliest possible opportunity. Additionally, I feel I am entitled to a written apology and compensation for the inconvenience caused.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ann Maria
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| 2020-05-24 | AkhilaJesu | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ann Maria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03902439024 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11755025167 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673170731707 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2325751668 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205403786505 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580078020182 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637430083545 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101788197047 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469248967965 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.