People are never satisfied and always want more.
In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is an argument that people are always unhappy with what they have and wish to have more than they do. This tendency should be considered as both positive and negative because of the following reasons.
On the one hand, constant dissatisfaction affects one's emotional stability. If someone does not fulfil needs and desires, they become frustrated and start looking for ways to compensate for the lack of things they want to have. Unfortunately, such people tend to drugs or alternative reality of the internet; there they can live their dreams.
Moreover, unlimited hunger for more things to obtain can be risky for people's health. To buy one more car or to travel to a tropical country more than once a year, people must work harder and earn higher salaries. Thus, they have not one but two jobs working till late hours without weekends, which raises multiple health issues. Recent studies showed that 75% of Americans have more than one job and are diagnosed with heart diseases ten times more often than others.
On the other hand, those who do not stop successfully reach their goals. A self-motivated person who consistently works on their life standards' improvement is capable of inventions that are useful for society. For example, my husband is never satisfied with the amount of money we have, so he regularly comes up with business projects and ideas for additional income. Recently, he invented the machine that traces the smallest gas leak, and now he has sold over 1,500 items to the locals. Undoubtedly, his perfectionism is beneficial for our family.
To conclude, while some people can be significantly productive and successful because they desire to have more than they have, it can backfire to them with negative consequences, like depression, addictions and health problems. To avoid those drawbacks, people should learn to enjoy their lives and be adequate with their desires.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'drug'.
Suggestion: drug
...ave. Unfortunately, such people tend to drugs or alternative reality of the internet;...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10191082803 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68350986617 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640127388535 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.146359984 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13928045237 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449067666155 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453815181853 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792903831403 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310813584068 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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