You are organising a trip to Paris, France for a group of students from England.
Write to the manager of the Youth Hostel Association in Paris. In your letter, explain
when you want to visit Paris
how long you will stay
how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require
Dear Mr Madjee,
I am writing to inquire your assistance with accommodation in terms of the trip to your city I am currently organising for several students from Cambridge University. First, I would like to share some information with you about the trip.
We are planning to go to Paris in 3 weeks since there will be a festival of flowers in the Floral Gallery. Also, this time of the year is considered the best to see Paris in all beauty.
Our departure is on June 29th, and our forward tickets are for July 12th. Thus, we expect stay in Paris for roughly a fortnight in total.
The group includes fifteen people and consists of thirteen students and two teachers. Therefore, we will need one twin room for adults, 2 twin rooms and 3 triple rooms for the students. Also, each room must have a bathroom and breakfast included; we want to prevent any kind of discomfort during the trip.
Thank you for your time and consideration; I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Kind regards,
Ben Johnson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Paris for roughly a fortnight in total. The group includes fifteen people and co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, therefore, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60499830741 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9085458866 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6363636364 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288969153598 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088283550909 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642849311504 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14529580483 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600689337282 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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