Some rich countries provide financial support to poor countries, but some other people claim that they should provide some other types of help to those poor countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give examples for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that nowadays, developing countries are often gotten financial supports by the developed countries. However, the action draws splits opinions. Many people claims that the rich countries should help those poor countries with other types of support instead of affects their financial statement. In my point of view, the rich countries should provide different types of support for the poor countries.
The reasons for the financial support are simple to explain. Firstly, giving away a large amount of money represent how generous and powerful these rich countries are. As the results, those poor countries become the allies with their supporters since they rely on these foreign source of money, which can affects the vote and opinion of the authorities in global meeting. Secondly, poor countries might not use the financial support wisely in order to improve their economy. For example, Pakistan is one of those poor countries who has received extremely high financial support from America, although their crisis has not yet improved in many decades.
Likewise, I must argue that the idea of giving financial support is inappropriate in many ways. In terms of what situation of those poor countries are going through, the rich countries could provide what are consider necessary for their improvement, such as food, medical supplies and military. In this way, poor countries would have the right support to go through their tough time. Besides, the relationship between the supporters and the receivers would be clear and healthy.
In the conclusion, financial support represents an action of helping each other, however, I would argue that this form of help could worsen the situation, instead, rich countries should support poor countries with the right form of help that they need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...e rich countries could provide what are consider necessary for their improvement, such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3006993007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54108015737 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6403345173 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41932052968 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158261555236 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108511628973 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28807378566 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657018839353 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.