Most of the world problem are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It irrefutable that a majority of pressing global issues are endangered by population explosion. In my point of view, I completely side with this view for many reasons.
One vexing problem worth mentioning is the shortage of housing in many major cities worldwide, especially in the densely populated area in the city center. The primary cause of this issue is the massive influx of rural migrants who flock to cities in search of better jobs and higher education opportunities. For example in the case of Beijing, where the government has made an enormous effort to combat overcrowding issues but falls to gain a satisfactory result. As a consequence, it leads to the occurrence of other global issues such as the increase in crime rate, food insecurity, and poor healthcare. Due to the uncontrolled growth of population, foods are insufficient to feed all individuals, children do not have a chance to be educated by schools, and some people are forced to commit a crime to meet their basic needs.
Another problem is pollution and climate change, which is triggered mainly by the burgeoning of the population. When many residents inhabit a place, their daily activities tend to do great harm to the surroundings, either accidentally or deliberately. For instance, not only do households dump their directly into the rivers without disposal, but they also consume a huge number of plastic bags, which leads to an increment in landfill sites. Simultaneously, deforestation results from unsustainable logging that could elevate the whole temperature of the earth tremendously. Alongside with the increase of population, the environment seems to be exacerbated.
To sum up, I strongly argue that it is overpopulation that results in overconsumption and other severe consequences. And if authorities, as well as individuals, do not take action, the earth would be put in danger because of the overload.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22875816993 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21832879362 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9096284186 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844055461142 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251355547655 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239310457731 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447104676553 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129843148459 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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