Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One can learn about another person from the books and movies that the person likes.
Learn and try to know an individual is a complex subject. There are amount of ways and objects those, show a different side of each person. Books and movies don’t provide a full picture of the people, but, significantly, they give us some helpful information. Personally, I think books and movies are a mirror and we can see peoples' minds and behaviors in it. I will explore my thoughts in the following paragraphs.
Initially, reading books can show us the area that an individual has an interest in. Movies are the same, as well. There are many different genres and subjects when it is going to be about reading or watching movies and people choose a book or a movie according to their interests. Therefore, we can understand their thoughts and interests from their choice. To further investigate, imagine a person, who is in comics books and comedy movies, according to his/ her choice you can know that this person is energetic.
The second reason is, these objects show the way of life that the person has. Personally, I think peoples who are reading are more mature and I can trust them, in other words, we can know their behavior from their habits. According to my experiences I believe people who read and watching movies, I mean beneficial ones, they have more knowledge and they are mature. Speak when they have and give a piece of advice when they are sure about it.
In conclusion, I think these two, books and movies, are the most helpful objects for understanding peoples’ minds and trying to know them. They are like a mirror of their thoughts and minds. And they are helping us to know who is a mature person for sharing and who is not. To sum up, we can trust to these objects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ividual is a complex subject. There are amount of ways and objects those, show a diffe...
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Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...Movies are the same, as well. There are many different genres and subjects when it is going to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, therefore, well, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61716171617 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53612701254 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488448844884 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7643029508 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7222222222 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217196972128 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692781916845 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429474927574 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143017108214 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629650609732 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.