Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The young generation's brain is always alert to learning. One of the most favorite activities for young people is watching movies and television, But it isn't mean necessarily this activity has a dreadful effect on their behavior. On the other hand, I deen it can have positive effects, as well. And the people of this age are mostly busy with more interesting entertainments. Another thing is the technology is improving and TV or movies are the last things can engender negative effect on this generation. I will illustrate my opinion in the following essay.
To begin with, watching movies or TV cannot be negatively affective a myriad. Contrastly, they can be lucrative, indeed. When the individuals watch a movie or a TV show, they will see the subject and the consequences, as well. Thus, they can appropriately learn from them.
Secondly, young individuals don't spend much time on TV or watching a movie, because they spend most of their time with their friends or in their schools and university classes and they will be working, too.
Significantly, If we evaluate the situation there won't be anything to worry about.
Finally, these days technology improves a myriad and televisions are the old generation of technology. They have a unique platform and this cannot cause any dreadful effects, because young people are more interested in the internet and social media. Hence, perhaps, the new technology will engender negative effects.
In conclusion, television and movies can be an appropriate way to enjoy free time and people don't have much for them because there are much more interesting entertainments these days. Thus, there are not any worries about them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, another thing, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09818181818 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88188643452 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6701798697 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177462709807 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542394140951 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043522965298 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820100728872 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064259642374 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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