Some older people struggle with the use of modern electronic technology such as smartphones and computers. Write the causes and propose solutions
Many senior citizens have to make a great effort for taking advantage of the latest technological devices especially mobile phones and computers. The difficulty for using these is mainly due to the lack of information about the technology and the biological challenges, which can be solved in two simple ways.
One main reason why people are facing challenges in managing modern devices in their old ages is that they have not been synchronizing themselves with the recent changes in modern technology. As a result, they have had a knowledge gap in the sense of the practical operation of the device, and they cannot perceive the benefits of this scientific discovery. Another cause is biological challenges; they start to feel multiple complications after the fifties. The latest mobile phone with touch screen technology, for instance, might not be operated perfectly by an old man because it requires commanding based on what it shows on the screen in order to get the actual output.
There are two pragmatic approaches to overcome obstacles regarding the use of recently developed electronic devices. Firstly, there should have some schools for old people where they can learn new programs, operating systems, and other technological advancements. Secondly, family members should provide such a device that the elderly can use conveniently. For example, a laptop with a keypad is more appropriate for them instead of a touch screen device.
To recapitulate, although they face many hardships particularly when using modern technological devices, it can be solved if the people of society help them properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35546875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94890312881 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3834502904 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167908898936 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628792851271 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385386602997 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104791847743 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333300915152 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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