Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough.
What are the reasons for this?
What are some possible solutions for this?
Nowadays, doctors recommend that the old should get more exercise, but some old people cannot consume enough time in doing exercise. In my opinion, there are some reasons, especially the care of people and the attraction of exercise, and some solutions, such as creating healthy community and kindergarten for children.
There are a huge number of reasons for this situation. The first reason that causes old humans do not want to get exercise is the time of them. When they are old, they have many things to care. For example, in China, old people usually spend their time to take care of their grandchildren. Therefore, they do not have enough time to exercise. Moreover, the second reason that impact the old is the attraction of doing exercise. In fact, the technological industry has been developing every day. Therefore, scientists innovated some innovations which has some healthy applications. The old, thus, do not need to spend time doing exercise.
If there is a problem, it will be a solution for it. Therefore, there are some solutions for this situation. First of all, governments should create more kindergarten for children. If grandparents and parents of children give them into kindergarten center, they will have more time to get exercise and build their health. Furthermore, today, people have created some healthy and exercising communities for the old. If people join in a community, they might have more discipline and attraction to get exercise.
To sum up, although many people do not get enough exercise to build their physical health, they might apply some appreciate solutions to solve their issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13909774436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78005675948 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481203007519 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8155260396 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425131600665 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146818662744 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797471137061 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281866656356 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449408854259 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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