Your character is strongly influenced by the place where you grew up. In what ways can growing up in a city or a countryside influence one's character? What is your view?
One's characteristics are affected and built through many factors, such as education, social status or an important factor, the living environment. Many personality surveys have pointed out that the place one grew up has a significant impact on his or her character,to give an illustration, one growing up in a city may be much different from one growing up in a countryside. More specifically, I will give three points in this essay to explain how growing up in urban areas or rural areas can influence one’s character.
To begin with, the differences in the pace of life between two types of areas can affect one’s personality in his or her future occupation. For example, children who are brought up in the city may be more confident, ambitious or have a better leadership than children who are in the countryside as they have to be through much pressure and have to adapt with the fast and busy pace of life from an early age. On the other hand, people who grow up in the countryside may be more sociable, cooperative or even more meticulous in work than people who grow up in the city as they usually live in a big family, have to communicate with many people like: the neighbors, the relatives, etc or have to help their parents with domestic chores, farming activities, etc since they were small.
In the second place, the living environment can influence one person’s behaviour with other people. Children growing up in the countryside are usually warm, caring and kind-hearted because they live in a place that is surrounded by many people, and in their living places, people often care about neighbors’ life and always be willing to help when someone meets the troubles. Otherwhile, children growing up in the city are often friendly and enthusiastic in relationships but not as caring and warm as ones in the countryside due to the fact that people in urban areas are busy with their own lives and don’t usually take notice of their neighbor’s lives.
Last but not least, the growing up place can have a certain impact on one’s living concept. A prime example is that who has grown up in a hustle and bustle city may want to experience or live in a peaceful neighborhood in later life, or one who has lived a slow and quiet life may want to discover and experience a more colorful and busy, marvelous life in a new city, or even start with a competitive occupation with passion and ambition.
Where you are dropped, as the saying goes, is who you are. Through possessing individuality, people often share some collective traits unique to the place where they live. However, people’s character can be attributed to many factors, the environment being only one of them. Our conscious efforts can make the biggest difference. As the saying goes, we are moulded by our own hands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, such as, to begin with, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78969072165 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79179064677 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468041237113 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.945373864 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.1875 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3125 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240754650244 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913860751792 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612099571649 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144902956566 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474481752093 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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